Reading & writing · Grades 5–9
Paragraphs, cohesion and revision
A paragraph develops a central idea with relevant details.
Understand the idea
Keep one focus
A paragraph develops a central idea with relevant details.
Show connections
Transitions indicate contrast, sequence, example or cause.
Revise for meaning
Remove repetition and repair unclear references before decorative word changes.
Worked examples
Which transition introduces a contrast?
However signals a contrasting idea.
however
Which transition introduces an illustration?
For instance introduces an example.
for instance
Try it yourself
Write a topic sentence for a paragraph explaining why a school garden can support learning.
Which detail best supports a paragraph about reducing classroom noise?
- Felt pads on chair legs reduced scraping sounds.
- The wall is pale blue.
- The chairs were delivered in April.
- The classroom has four windows.
Revise this repetition: The path was muddy. There was mud on the path. The path had lots of mud.
Which sentence order is most logical for instructions?
- Check the result, assemble parts, gather materials.
- Assemble parts, check the result, gather materials.
- Check the result, gather materials, assemble parts.
- Gather materials, assemble parts, check the result.
Answers and marking notes
Answers and marking notes
- For example: A school garden gives pupils practical ways to investigate living things.
Accept a focused claim that can be developed with relevant details.
- Felt pads on chair legs reduced scraping sounds.
This detail directly addresses noise reduction.
- The path was covered in thick mud.
Accept a concise sentence preserving the central information.
- Gather materials, assemble parts, check the result.
Preparation precedes assembly and checking.
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