Reading & writing · Grades 8–12
Paraphrasing, attribution and argument
Changing a few words is not enough; express the meaning accurately in a new structure.
Understand the idea
Paraphrase the idea
Changing a few words is not enough; express the meaning accurately in a new structure.
Separate voices
Make clear which claims are yours and which come from a source.
Test the support
Relevant evidence still needs reasoning that connects it to the claim.
Worked examples
Which practice best describes a genuine paraphrase?
Both independent wording and attribution matter.
Restating an idea accurately in a new structure and attributing it
Paraphrase this original sentence: The trial showed that a wider handle made the tool easier to grip.
Preserve the finding without adding claims about every user or every tool.
For example: In the test, people held the tool more easily when its handle was wider.
Try it yourself
Which claim is too broad for evidence from one class?
- More testing would be useful.
- The trial involved one class.
- The method improves learning in every school.
- The class improved on this task.
A source reports an association, but an essay says it proves causation. Explain the problem.
Which item normally needs attribution in an academic essay?
- A distinctive argument developed by another author
- The number of paragraphs in your draft
- Your own original observation, identified as such
- Your own choice of heading
Which phrase clearly introduces a counterargument?
- No evidence is needed...
- A reasonable objection is that...
- Everyone knows...
- This cannot possibly be questioned...
Answers and marking notes
Answers and marking notes
- The method improves learning in every school.
A single-class trial cannot establish a universal claim.
- The essay strengthens the conclusion beyond the evidence; association may have other explanations.
Credit accurate preservation of the source's level of certainty.
- A distinctive argument developed by another author
Borrowed ideas require attribution even without direct quotation.
- A reasonable objection is that...
It presents an opposing point for consideration.
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